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28 March 2010 @ 08:46 am
Hell Is Other People,Chapter 5b  
Title: Hell Is Other People
Word count: 11900.
Summary: Jared is a hunter, but he is about to find out that evil isn’t just the preserve of demons.
Pairing: J2 eventually
Warnings: Excessive abuse of Jensen, at last rescue is at hand.
Disclaimer: As far as I know Jared isn’t engaged in hunting monsters and last time I checked Jensen wasn’t chained up naked in the basement of a church and wasn’t in a relationship with Jared, so please don’t sue.
Notes: Here I offer thanks and unending praise to garvaldmains, who has helped, improved and encouraged me with endless patience when I gibbered at her, and she also provided the awesome banner! *Big, Big Hugs*   Please note this has been split into two due too posting constraints.

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Current Mood: nervousnervous
 
 
lady_krystal_79lady_krystal_79 on March 29th, 2010 10:44 am (UTC)
Oh, oh, oh! No! Please, you can't stop now! I was so into this, and then there was a Part B, and then...it ended! I want to know more!!

*sigh* Okay, okay. I'll wait. Maybe give my heart time yo stop racing... ;-)
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:18 pm (UTC)
So you liked it then? *G* so when I finally stop rocking after the chapter of doom I'll get back into the swing of it soon.
inanna_maat: Perfectinanna_maat on March 29th, 2010 08:20 pm (UTC)
Amazing fic!!!!! two days reading everything and it´s WOWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW *hysterical mode ON*

thanks for it!
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:23 pm (UTC)
So you like it then? *blushes well thank you for such a great comment.
sadritsuka12sadritsuka12 on March 29th, 2010 08:47 pm (UTC)
LOVE IT... SOO LOVE IT,, JARED IS SO KIND... DOES THAT MEAN NOW THAT JARED HAVE TO LEAVE.. CAUSE THEY NO MORE DEMON TO KILL.....
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the comment, and I'll let you into a little secret, Jared will be sticking around for a while.
MacByrnemacbyrne on March 29th, 2010 11:53 pm (UTC)
Just read the whole series; absolutely gripping! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm betting we haven't heard to last of Morgan!
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the comment, and no we haven't heard the last of Morgan just yet.
Andreadrea78 on March 30th, 2010 07:25 am (UTC)
I love it, I love it, I love it!!!!! :-)
Brilliant!
Thank you so much for this fantastic story!!
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the comment, I'm very pleased you're enjoying this, I hope to keep up the good work.
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sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 3rd, 2010 09:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed how Morgan was outmanoeuvred. More to follow soon.
serendip50serendip50 on April 6th, 2010 04:48 pm (UTC)
Hello...just found this fiction and it's totally engrossing. Especially because Jensen is so vulnerable and hurt...and that hits all of my Jensen kinks. Then you sprinkle caretaker, caveman!Jared and I'm as happy as an Easter bunny. And protective Chris...enough said.

Love all the detailed attention you gave to the exorcism...it was truly amazing writing and Jensen's performance on the page is as worthy of an Oscar as it is off. All of the demonesque sexyness rousing tempers and lustful feelings were brilliantly conceived and cleverly uncensored for the tender ears of the shocked congregation....I could definitely picture the scenario as it played out. Bravo.

I think Jensen will have to have a really long and explanatory talk with his parents when he is fit enough...I'm not sure how his father will react but generally speaking Mrs Ackles is quite a perceptive and understanding woman.

I'm intrigued as to what Chris has presented to Morgan (poor JDM, I adore him truly). Maybe an Asp in a basket...lol.

Look forward to reading more soon. Brilliant job so far. xx

sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 6th, 2010 06:38 pm (UTC)
Thank you for your amazing comment, I'm just so happy that is has been so well received and its my very first multi-chapter piece and AU to boot!

I admit I have a kink for vulnerable and hurt Jensen, so my story was always going to be slanted that way as well as caveman Jared and protective Chris.

The exorcism was fun to write, I know that probably makes me a bad person, I just kept seeing how the show deals with demons and I let it run from there.

There maybe a little chat with Jensen and his parents in the future, and even I'm not sure how his father is going to react.

As for poor old JDM (I did feel a little guilty about making him the bad guy" all I'm gonna say is please just bear in mind what Jim, Chris and Jared do for a living *evil grin*
20secondstomars20secondstomars on April 6th, 2010 05:57 pm (UTC)
I normally don't read non-con. Seldom I do and skip the respective parts when I see them coming. What drew me in to you story however was the "excessive abuse of Jensen" part of your summary. The way it is stated, I don't know ... it always made me giggle somehow. Yeah, I'm weird. LOL

I like your story. *gives a pat on the back*
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 6th, 2010 06:28 pm (UTC)
I felt in light of beating the crap out of that poor defenseless gorgeous boy I had to put that warning in. As for the non-con the scene in the church was as bad I it needed to get, the next chapter deals with some of Morgan's plans for Jensen but no more non-con that's a promise (well not directly more alluded to, you'll have to read it to understand what I'm babbling about!)

Anyhoo thanks for your comment and no I don't think your weird, don't forget you only read it I wrote it *G*
sazzy_angel: dean holding belasazzy_angel on April 11th, 2010 12:08 am (UTC)
ooooooooooooo i love it. Yay jensen is free for the moment. :D
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 25th, 2010 03:09 pm (UTC)
Yes he is free of Morgan, I promise I'm working on the next part but R/L keeps tripping me up, but I'm not giving up.
winchester_grl4winchester_grl4 on April 13th, 2010 07:54 pm (UTC)
I'll admit, I'm a sucker for hurt!jensen. But I really like how strong he is in this fic despite everything done to him. Add protective Jared and you've got me hooked. Sprinkle in some kick-ass, protective!chris and I'm salivating for the next update. Kudos!
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 25th, 2010 03:13 pm (UTC)
Yes I'm a sucker for hurt Jensen too, in the end it got me to write this little tale. Also protective Jared and I love Leverage so a kick ass Kane was a must. I am working on the next part.
Sissi: Dark Deandreamers_dh on April 23rd, 2010 06:14 pm (UTC)
it’s only slightly lethal

*giggles*

Now I'm curious again!

Thank you for the exelent update. For a few moments I was very worried about everything but it seems to be just fine now. I hope it stays as it is
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 25th, 2010 03:15 pm (UTC)
Like I said only slightly lethal.

I promise that Morgan will be dealt with in the next chapter which i'm working on R/L permitting.
velvetsun: Images: Cliffhanger!velvetsun on April 24th, 2010 04:52 am (UTC)
I just spent the past few hours reading this story and wow, I love it. (even if you were very mean to Jensen. Hopefully there will be some comforting coming up. *nods*) anyway, Ive really enjoyed this story and sincerely hope that Chris gave him a taste of his own medicine. Although he might enjoy it, sick freak. I'm sure he came up with something good. Can't wait for the next chapter! =)
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on April 25th, 2010 03:16 pm (UTC)
*Blushes* thank you for your comment. I promise that Jensen will be looked after and as for Morgan well you get to find out all about him and what happens to him in the next chapter.
kaimorekaimore on May 6th, 2010 04:02 am (UTC)
So this is a good story, I really loved Jensens 'exorcism' and his wit. But I don't believe some of the feelings. IMHO Mac and Jensen should be pissed or sad. Not so accepting of what happened.
But I'm still loving the story, just a little worried about jensens emotional state seeming so 'fine'
sasha_dragon: hell iconsasha_dragon on May 6th, 2010 12:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks for your comment, and I agree with what you're saying. I promise that Jensen and Mac are not as fine as they appear. There will be emotional fall out from this, it's at the moment I think it hasn't sunk what's happened.

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deepasoceandeepasocean on May 28th, 2010 08:31 am (UTC)
Only slightly lethal? Darn.
sassyfansassyfan on June 8th, 2010 01:02 am (UTC)
the exorcism was brillint!

only slightly lethal! I hope it's painful