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10 August 2010 @ 08:05 pm
Coming Home, (1/1), R, J2, AU.  

Title: Coming Home
Word Count: 9590
Summary:  F.B.I. agent Jared Padalecki works in the L.A. Under cover Unit as a handler.   He has fallen in love with the under  cover agent he looks after but has never met. Now Jared is engaged in a race against time and across L.A. To get to him before it’s too late. Can Agent Jensen Ackles hang on long enough, to finally meet Jared.
Rating: R For violence and language
Pairing: J2
Disclaimer: Sadly these gorgeous men are not mine, I have reached a deal with the crossroads demon, I bring him a fic he likes and I get to keep em! So with that in mind here we go again. Although after he read this he said I couldn’t have Jensen, if I kept doing bad things to him.
Notes:  I know little of F.B.I. undercover work only what I see in films and T.V. so all mistakes are mine, along with my knowledge of L.A's geography or lack of it    As always many thanks go to bigj52 my truly awesome beta and images for my banner are fromraloria , andreas_ri .

 

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Current Location: Home
Current Mood: nervousnervous
Current Music: Leverage
 
 
jo463jo463 on August 11th, 2010 02:39 am (UTC)
Nicely done! I really enjoyed it!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:19 pm (UTC)
Thank you, so pleased you liked it.
lady_krystal_79: JensenTalllady_krystal_79 on August 11th, 2010 02:40 am (UTC)
This was great. And *sigh* I totally understand where Jared's coming from. Those legs, that body, the freckles, teh eyes... Glad they finally got to meet!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:22 pm (UTC)
*Blushes* ahh thank you! and as a confirmed Dean/Jensen girl I'm totally with Jared, it's those eyes *sigh* they're just so beautiful. I wanted to to keep them apart until the final scene, glad the meeting lived up to expectations.
z3s_keep_goingz3s_keep_going on August 11th, 2010 04:08 am (UTC)
this was great, nicely done1
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you, glad you like it.
maria9631maria9631 on August 11th, 2010 05:21 am (UTC)
THIS WAS JUST AWESOME! LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!

sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Samspnfreak15 on August 11th, 2010 06:53 am (UTC)
this was so great! The relationship between Jared and Jensen reminds be of the relationship between Garcia and Morgan on Criminal Minds

sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:26 pm (UTC)
Thanks very much! and wow what a compliment, I love Criminal Minds and I really enjoy Garcia and Morgan's relationship on the show.
jesseofthenorthjesseofthenorth on August 11th, 2010 07:47 am (UTC)
Nicely done!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:26 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
mangacat201: fancatflailmangacat201 on August 11th, 2010 09:20 am (UTC)
*keeeeels over and dies from the absolute fricking AWESOME*

...
*FIST PUMP*

...I couldn't even properly read the last paragraph because I was screaming the top of my lungs off YES I KNEW IT WAS FRICKING JENSEN... sooo perfect. the remote narration and all that, damnit, this is soooo meming, like ASAP.

YES YES YES... AWESOME IN BOTTLES. *melts into sticky puddle of goo*
Cat


PS: AND BESIDES THAT THERE'S GOTTA BE MOAR. I'll haunt you. for SURE . seriously, I'm seriously serious. PLZPLZPLZWITH CREAMCOATEDJAREDONTOP.

Edited at 2010-08-11 09:22 am (UTC)
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:28 pm (UTC)
Hi there *Waves* so you may just have enjoyed this little tale then?

Just so I don't get haunted, I can assure you there will be more from these guys in the future. Thanks for the comment.
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witchy78witchy78 on August 11th, 2010 12:33 pm (UTC)
Awww the end was so cute ;-) another great fix from you. I'm enjoying every one of them. Thanks for your work. And now I can't wait for your other WIP to be updated ;-)
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you, so happy you liked it. As for my other WIP, the next chapter has returned form the beta's and I will post it soon.
bornof_sorrow: Sam and Dean smilingbornof_sorrow on August 11th, 2010 01:08 pm (UTC)
I really enjoyed that story - good one.

Of course now we need to see what happens after the fade to black. No pressure of course!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:30 pm (UTC)
Thank you, and I'm thrilled you liked it.

It's starting to look like there will be more from these guys the date included.
Somer: Misha Jensen Jared Jim ComicCon2010somer on August 11th, 2010 02:08 pm (UTC)
Ohhhhh, man...how awesome was that?

And goosebumps in the end!!! Yeah!!!

MoreMoreMoreMore.....

P.S. As Jensen walked towards Kripke he knew he heard several pairs of panties spontaneously combust. Yep, mine too!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 19th, 2010 12:31 pm (UTC)
Ahhh shucks, thanks!

I have a feeling these guys will be back again some day!

And oh yeah, he does that to me all the damn time *G*
mousedmmousedm on August 11th, 2010 02:22 pm (UTC)
Another wonderful story from you. You combine just the right amounts of plot to go with your h/c.
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 23rd, 2010 07:47 am (UTC)
*Ahhh schucks* thank you and I'm so happy that you like my little scribbles.
Deanna Wesson: Jared Smiledeannawesson on August 11th, 2010 03:04 pm (UTC)
Very awesome, enjoyed it immensely! Please tell me you're going to continue this, because it's really too good to be an only child. XD
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 23rd, 2010 07:48 am (UTC)
Thank you, well there is a very good chance this only child will be getting some siblings at some point soon.
tuckercat2tuckercat2 on August 11th, 2010 04:38 pm (UTC)
sigh, it's over already????? (pouting)

Yes it was really really good!!!
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 23rd, 2010 07:48 am (UTC)
Sad to say it's over for now, thank you for your comment.
xwacky: spn dean fallen warriorxwacky on August 11th, 2010 06:17 pm (UTC)
I really really like the premises that they only met over the phone & never in person until the very end. Love the well placed flashbacks too. I could read more stories in this 'verse (if you so inclined to write more) ;-)
sasha_dragonsasha_dragon on August 23rd, 2010 07:50 am (UTC)
Thank you, I'm so pleased you liked the premise, and I enjoyed weaving the flashbackls together to show the relationship developing. There is a very strong chance there will be more in this verse.
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